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منتدى ترفيهي تعليمي يضم مشاركات عدد من المثقفين والطلبة السوريين


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    Thana Kanakri
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    Post  Thana Kanakri Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:13 am

    موضوعك ممتاز أضفت بعض التعديلات ليصبح أقوى لغوياً
    أرجو الأنتباه لإستخدام الزمنين معا
    الماضي البسيط و الماضي المستمر في جملة أو جملتين على الأقل و هو الهدف من وراء الموضوع
    شكراً لاهتمامك وفقك الله
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    Post  Feras Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:57 am

    One evening, I went shopping with my friend . We left at 5.00 o'clock and we were coming back home on foot when we saw the opposite building on fire and people were screaming for help.I ran towards the burning building and we saw a lot of people in it My friend called the emergency and the firefighters.After that,the firefighters took the people out of the building and extinguished the fire. I was very happy because I helped saving lives
    يرجى تصحيح الأخطاء إن وجدت
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